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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-11-06 10:37 AM

As long as the river flows along
The birds fill the air with song

The evening sky painted with ardor flame
As the day give way to the night with modest acclaim

As the sweet aroma of the night lightens the worlds mood
The silence heard is delightful as the stars in the sky extrude

But what delights me most of all is knowing
That the love we share is showing

For as the rivers flow
So does our love grow

Like the sky painted in ardor flame
Our love goes beyond being tame

It is your very essence that is the aroma of the night
Filling my heart with delight

It is our love that fills my heart with tranquility
Giving to my world stability

alan

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-06 10:48 AM

Alan, I love when you write like this!! *SIGH* you do romance soooooooooo well

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-11-06 10:50 AM

Thank you SEA...always a pleasure to hear from you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-06 12:29 PM

What a nice love poem. To be grounded by Love looks good on you.

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

4 posted 2001-11-06 12:50 PM

A beautiful expression of a wonderful feeling. *WARM HUGS* I love it.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Cheryl Flemming
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

5 posted 2001-11-06 11:02 PM

You will melt many a heart with these beautiful words filled with love and passion.What a lucky lady she is to have a man like you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-11-06 11:05 PM

Oh *sigh* Alan! You do romance soooo very very well! Enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2001-11-06 11:08 PM

Thank you Ladies...maybe I should write more like these

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2001-11-06 11:11 PM

Well if this doens't fill the air with love, I don't what does.
How refreshing these words of yours were to read!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-11-06 11:15 PM

(smiles) Oh Alan, this is so so beautiful, your love always shines in every word you write! (smiles) She will so lucky to have you forever! (sigh) More, more!!! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2001-11-06 11:18 PM

Blues...thank you..glad you like it..

Noah...thank you sir...

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

11 posted 2001-11-06 11:31 PM

Alan,

Ohhh I cannot tell you how much I love this! This one is going straight to my library

So sweet and romantic.... *sighs* I love it... I said that before didn't I? lol

Yes.. keep writing like this please.. you are wonderful at it

Hugs,
Tara

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

12 posted 2001-11-07 03:09 AM

beautiful Alan
airborne or grounded
with love surrounded
love being poured
I truly adored
Hope

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