Open Poetry #16 |
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Give me a Name |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
![]() Give me a Name miasmic mistings left my wanderings listing longing roads beckoned m’muse swirled me in hoary tendrils fingering glacially reserved lo the light recedes leaving only soul beliefs warming me alone |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) That's what I love about dreams and muses; they take us ever so far, and sometimes we can use our imagination and wonder what lies ahead! (big hugggsssss) BRAVO, SWEET KARILEA!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunshine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We are never alone. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sunshine - Just lovely. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtaking, Karilea! Beautiful! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Transcendental....Copious... Resplendent.. and many more for you....and simply wonderful. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is very nice. Japanese formats are fun to use sometimes. ![]() Theo |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
ditto rwood ![]() ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a nice touch on the roads we wander down. This had the warmth of a cashmere sweater. It looks awful nice, but the feel on our skin is so soft, keeping us warm inside. And you are the lucky one to be wearing it!! That's my take anyway. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
miasmic!a heavy vaporous mi*as*ma (noun), plural -mas also -ma*ta [New Latin, from Greek, defilement, from miainein to pollute] First appeared 1665 1 : a vaporous exhalation formerly believed to cause disease; also : a heavy vaporous emanation or atmosphere 2 : an influence or atmosphere that tends to deplete or corrupt .......................... and i inhale every word, the name of the author, sunshine on my mind, illuminating the aura of the art, haloed -------------- hehe... i LOVED this, sunshineyone..... i had to look up the miasmic word because i didn't know what it meant but if you need a name for this poem, that's what i'd call it.... if you need a name for YOU, well, geez, the name you already chose is perfect!!! you bring light into the space between the darkness, smiling your words upon us, like dawn... er, or something.... or other... poetic is an adjective, right? geesh, i'm into verbs just trying to figure out how to do it as beautifully as can be done....... *smile* you are Poet!! you write so well so concisely [dodo said rambling again] geesh all this to say... I LOVED IT!!!!!! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--this just drifts to that place...where alone feels so right. Wonderful writing! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautiful writing. Peaches |
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