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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-11-06 05:45 PM



I never been
quiet that innocent
But I've chosen to ignore
some signs
I'm not as naive
as I may seem
When I can't reach you
When you disappear
When your world revolves
around mistery
I've known your weaknesses
I've known your pain
All I ask of you
is to always
return
In me you'll always find
unconditional love
even if at times
I'm at a loss

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 11-06-2001).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2001-11-06 06:17 PM


Walker....this is the strongest devotion any
of us can ever give to another...Unconditional Love...

Well said and superb...

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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2 posted 2001-11-06 06:27 PM


Wow, walker.  Excellent write here.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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3 posted 2001-11-06 10:08 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, bless your loving heart, your heart glows with such unconditional love and faith! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! May love forever fill your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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4 posted 2001-11-06 10:23 PM


Enjoyed Walker!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
5 posted 2001-11-06 11:09 PM


Yes, unconditional love is a very high love indeed. Not so sure it exists myself, other than maybe the love of a parent. For there are always some conditions, even if they are minor ones. But, who am I to know. If you have found unconditional love, then you are blessed indeed.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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