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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Her hair it flew as whispers do, with softness on a breeze Her eyes, they sparkled with a warmth, which every sense did please Her face it brought me sunshine which the day refused to give Her smile, it brought back happiness, which once again does live |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Her face it brought me sunshine which the day refused to give" Rick, this is absolutely delightful! Such a perfect cadence and rhyme ... so tender in your warm and loving sentiments. What a lovely morning read, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Simply ...she...right, Rick?  What a wonderful piece to her... Lovely indeed.... I Wish you all happiness and sunshine... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Rick, this has such lovely flow....nicely done. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rick's Snippets golden pieces of joy, scattered around... they're wonderful! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Well done Rick. MAy your happiness continue for a very long time.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Rick! I really love this! Lucky lady who inspired you to write this. Lovely, lyrical, and oh so endearing. Besides there is a beautiful song called "She" which came back to haunt me when I read this. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a very lucky lady she is to bring sunshine back into your life. Your words are beautiful and filled with such tenderness. *sigh* a wonderful way for me to start my day. You have put a smile in my heart as I read of your happiness. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick, Very nice, I enjoyed the read |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Kit, thank you for this wonderful reply, nice to share my thoughts which a lovely Spring day inspired. From you Kit, you comments well appreciated. My Enchanted Melody, thank you for your reply, it is happiness and sunshine which inspired the write. A Whisper's Caress, your reply to me is much appreciated and enjoyed, thank you. Dear Sunshine, I am glad you are enjoying my Snippits, the first line comes to me and the shortness of the piece then seems enough. Thank you for your reply. Alan, thank you for your reply, happiness takes many faces and with you and all my friends I find it every night. Dear Enchantress, I am glad that the read brought you a memory of a song, one day I hope that the song will bring a memory of a short poem. Thanks for the reply. Dear Startime, you have a heart which spreads sunshine to all, I hope you have all wonderful days, thank you for your reply. Seymour Tabin, I am so happy you enjoyed the read, thank you for the reply. THANK YOU ALL MY FRIENDS. Sincerely Rick |
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