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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-11-05 02:02 PM

Shut away darkness
bring in blinding day
until tomorrow sweats
from yesterday's swealtering heat

Open doors once closed to the hated
whose blistered feet have walked tired paths
scorn the cherished who loftily side step reality
while feigning samartinship

Experienced eyes burn like no other
flimsy walls crumble so easily
are you a brave monster like me?

~Tier
3/00

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 11-05-2001).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-05 03:04 PM

I like your style, Tiers, and your bravery. Embrace the castaways.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-11-05 03:51 PM

and what truths would we tell
if in the telling no harm would fall
to those who speak of open hearts
and gentle wishes....

I do so enjoy your words dear friend...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-11-05 03:54 PM

Tier~ I love this piece...very well written.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-05 04:15 PM

Tier I love this piece.Good job.I likethe bravery thing.
Peaches

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-11-05 07:26 PM

Neat form and unique style. Nicely done!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-11-05 07:42 PM

great job here Tier. . . let the fight begin. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-11-05 07:45 PM

WOW!!!Unique and very well done. I really like this. *giggling* I don't think I am a very brave monster but I am learning. Well put.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-11-05 07:51 PM

A very interesting write, Tier...I enjoyed the many nuances in this one...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-11-05 08:31 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh my...I'm kind of a wimp, so I'll just take it one step at a time! (giggles) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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