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The dream world and yet...
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The dream world and yet... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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that final cut My eyes closed shut in the night Taking dark shadows to sleep, My mind stopped being at fight Walking with thoughts, in too deep. Sweet dreams begin to awake, Blooming like the morning rose My inner mind holds the sea~ Ocean of charming repose. Soft winds blow in smooth engage Stroking emerald green waves; All parts of this world wide stage Smile in glad welcoming sways. Ah! Dream world is beautiful Lovely as the setting sun, And we are just blameless fools, Dwelling with the dreamless ones. Everything's a miracle, In the warm wombs of these dreams; It's such a safe shielding shell, That keeps out life's deadly screams. And here on this lonely night When my body begins to sleep, The dream world opens its eyes And I jump with happy leaps. (Yet, I can still feel the hurt The sharpness of that final cut) ***** *°!°* * - * *** "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What peaceful poetry. A perfectly inviting dreamworld, tinted with just a small dose of reality. Thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes life has lots of reality to bring us back to perspective...sometimes our dreams and the reality of life find common ground...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This makes me want to sleep and escape... too bad those nightmares are such a bother. *S* I like this a lot, Sudhir... well written!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent writing here Sidhir. Enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If not for the wounds hurting my friend, how would we ever be reassured that we are human and have a heart? Wonderful work from you and I am more than elated to come in and see your name here with us again. Your creativity and talent has always been one of my favorites and this one reminds me why. Superb!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Superb write, my friend. So nice to see you here again. All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all, very much, my friends. Time at hand is short so I am unable to be more lucid in coming up with a better response for the kindness that you have showered. Regards to all of you, Sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sudhir, this was most inviting, and the end a little touch of unpleasant reality. I think I shall go back to my dreams. Sandra |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, Sandra. Regards, Sudhir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--some fear their dreams and welcome day, others find sweet relief in dreams display...I think you see the beauty in both, tinged by the hurt that life can sometimes bring. Peaceful wake to you, I wish. A poem from the heart..well done! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It is so good to see your words grace Passions' pages again...you know my love of any poem that contains the word Emerald...and this one spoke so softly to me... thank you... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Martie and Lady in white, Thank you so much for coming by... and your more-than-kind responses... Regards, Sudhir |
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