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Open Poetry #16

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-11-05 01:37 AM

You

Tonight I feel lonely and I
don't want to be alone and blue
because I love you only and I
want to spend my life with you.
I wonder will you ever make every one
of my dreams come true and if you do
will you love me forever so I can always
be in love with you and never through?
As long as you say you love me too
I will be in love with you so true.
This shall be my lifetime endeavor
to be the man who lived his life
while he was so in love with you.

JamesLee
November04
2001

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

1 posted 2001-11-05 01:56 AM

Awww! This poem was sweet!
Not a lot of men write about their sensitive feelings, but you did it wonderfully.

Do or die!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-11-05 01:59 AM

Hehe, are you the big cuddly teddy bear in the other YOU poem?
Sweet write, James

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2001-11-05 07:15 AM

James,

I love reading your poems in the mornings. They always make me smile

So sweet James!

Hugs,
Tara

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-05 01:52 PM

Thank you so much Domzi, midnitesun and Tara for reading and commenting...I am writing about a beautiful woman that I love that lives in Pearl City, Hawaii...James

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