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Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-11-04 11:11 PM

When two hearts ignite
Love becomes translucent light
Two lives become one
As the love outshines the sun

I will blanket your heart with my love
Like the virgin snow from above
Blankets the ground
Before tracks across it can be found

My love will light your nights
Like the silvery harvest moon light
I will hold you above all
Our love will have us totally enthral

Our love will keep us together until the twelfth of never
We shall walk the paths of love until the second eon of forever
Together we will be for as long as there are stars in the sky
United on the wings of love we forever shall fly
alan

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-04 11:15 PM

A nice love poem, Alan. And I could almost hear an old Johhny Mathis song 'The Twelvth of Never'.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-11-04 11:20 PM

Alan, this is delicately lovely

It's a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-11-04 11:21 PM

Midnitesun...I stole that line from him...please don't tell him..
thanks for reading this..
alan

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-11-04 11:22 PM

Well thank you Melissa.I am glad you liked it..

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-11-04 11:24 PM

Jeez, where the heck ya been hidin lately??? Great poem here, speaks very tenderly of love.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-11-04 11:28 PM

Until the twelfth of never...I'll still be loving youuuuu!
Oops, sorry got carried away with the song there Alan. Good write! Very romantic!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-11-04 11:29 PM

Well, Alan, you only borrowed part. "You ask how long I'll love you, I'll tell you true, until the twelvth of Never, I'll still be loving you, Until the twelvth of never, and that's a long, long time" That's as much as I remember of this song.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2001-11-05 08:05 AM

Tracey..I have been here..you can find me in every corner of the place..that they will let an old man into...Glad you liked this little thing
Enchantress...you can sing all you want to..

Midnitesun..I found that song on here awhile back..

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-11-06 03:39 AM

Enjoyed reading this Alan...James

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2001-11-06 05:38 AM

Thanks James

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

11 posted 2001-11-06 07:36 AM

so so pretty....

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

12 posted 2001-11-06 07:59 AM

thank you Whisper

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