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Accordionmaid
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since 2001-10-28
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0 posted 2001-11-04 09:34 PM



Dreaming I found you
Slept through the sun's second show
Ran all the way home

~~~~~

Overloaded clouds
Like me, are bundles of nerves
Fray the ragged sky

~~~~~

Like flecks of light, we
Shall fly over, lie under
These hills bathed in light

~~~~~

Bold tree grasps shoreline
Boulder listens; on shoulder's
Earth I press my ear

© Copyright 2001 Wendy Stanford - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-11-04 09:41 PM


These are lovely, Accordionmaid! Very nice!
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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2 posted 2001-11-04 09:55 PM


BRAVO!!!Each one paints its own picture and when brought together they create a masterpiece. Magnificent.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2001-11-04 10:01 PM


I liked them all
especially the first one.

Sleeping through the suns second show, running all the way home.     

Oh Yes!!!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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4 posted 2001-11-05 07:30 PM


Beautiful work, Accordionmaid!!  Nature is gorgeous in all her splendor.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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