Dreaming (a two syllable poem)

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Open Poetry #16

Dreaming (a two syllable poem)

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-11-04 06:54 PM

Dreaming

Touching
gently
Tender
clutching

Kissing
deeply
Nothing
missing

Sighing
softly
Joyful
crying

Pleasing
lover
Never
teasing

Dreaming
pleasure
Waken
beaming

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

1 posted 2001-11-04 07:17 PM

Enjoyed this. Pleasing and lovely to the eye and the ear!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2001-11-04 07:19 PM

Wow, Startime. This is great.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2001-11-04 07:25 PM

Startime,

Wonderful

I know I couldn't do this.. my mind would have drawn a blank for 2 syllable words for years *chuckles* I liked it.

Hugs,
Tara

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-04 07:37 PM

Hey Karen! I like this!! Well done, Nancy!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-11-04 07:41 PM

What a perfect poem, I love it sweetie!

((HUGS))

RP

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-04 09:48 PM

beautifully done and very romantic....Like
I keep saying...your growth as a poet has
been remarkable over the past weeks....
I enjoyed this Karen...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2001-11-04 09:51 PM

Very beautiful, Karen!

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2001-11-04 09:53 PM

Most excellent ... catching isn't it!!
May your dreams find truth dearest Star!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2001-11-04 09:55 PM

Startime, you touched on the best part of a dream, only to awaken to them and beam.
I liked that line!!

You are one talented lady indeed!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2001-11-04 09:56 PM

This is sweet Karen. Lovely dreaming

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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