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Still Here
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Still Here |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
It Is still here, still here, Can't let my heart go, Still here, My heart for you, Your memories are still here, I can't let my heart go, Whatever I do, It Is still here, Guess, My feeling for you Is still here, Don't you know? The days go by, But your love Is still here, Still here, Still here Inside my heart, Your song I listen, My heart beats, and those words you said earlier, It is still here, Still here, I can't let the things you to say go off my mind, Can't let my heart go, It is stillhere, still here, Don't know why my heart has feelings, when you already said and done, What you have done to my heart? Can't let my feelings go, Because It's still here, Still here.... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sometimes our hearts don't want to let go of certain things. Your emotions are clearly expressed in this, Vandana.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Vandana, Good Write..some things just never leave the heart : ) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* do I ever know the feeling. You couldn't have said it better. Sometimes our heart just will not let go of the love we feel. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write! Enjoyed thoroughly! Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another one that would make an excellent song! I could hear the tune playing in my head! Very good, Vandana! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I agree, this one sings, I could see it being a song. Nice write Vandana If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
these feelings are universal aren't they dear? -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sigh . . . it's never easy to let go. You've written it well, my friend. All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's always there, isn't it my friend? well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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