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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-11-04 01:03 AM



Listen (listen)to me sing?
Listen...there is poetry
in the falling of the leaves
as they tick and tock and waft
across
the timelessness
of breeze
won't you listen?
Won't you please
(listen to me)
please believe?

(BELIEVE IN ME...)
grant me pardon
sweet release
on knees--my warden--
what is one less soul to truth?
Tell me, what am I to you?

I will dance a jester's prance--
ripened cherries, lip's romance...
velvet fingers, eyes in trance--
thighs apart in bay's entrance.
I will let loose the seven veils--
read you secrets of entrails.
I'll gather herbs unknown to all--
I'll tell the tales of angels' fall...

I beg of you. Release this dove.
Let me fly home to my love.
I can no longer sing in cage.
Release me, lest the Falcon rage.

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RSWells
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1 posted 2001-11-04 01:24 AM


Angst, pure angst.
WRBreezin
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2 posted 2001-11-04 06:43 AM



A sobering cry for liberty, of the heart bound and pining. Very Good!

Willie B

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3 posted 2001-11-04 11:52 AM




(big hugggssssss) Such a desperate cry of yearning for love echos across this poem, dearest friend! (sad sigh) I hope this isn't related to a feeling you're having right now, but if it is, my heart goes out to you and pray you fly to your love soon! (sigh) I know tis feeling ever so well too! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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