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Repercussions and What Makes Walt Mad...
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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(this is meant to be seen at all directions and has been something I have wanted to express for a long time) I’ve seen how she writes to him in IM’s How sick is my wife to be talking to him How she is stiff when I walk in the room Runs from the keyboard and picks up a broom First it was poems, she wrote them at night Watching the T.V. I gave it no fight She told me her poems got lots of replies She was out of my hair, so why should I pry? Then I got jealous I’d have to confess. Getting too happy and acting the pest, She asked that I’d read each one that she wrote All replies were from guys I sure did take note. In her MSN, AOL and Yahoo There were plenty of girls but boys were there too I said, no more, of that site I’d allow She’d better not write and come to bed now! ‘bout a month passed and my wife was all sad She begged to go back, post poems and chat So since she was good I let her return (And if she was bad, I’d force her to learn) That’s when she met a new guy on the block Whose poems were good, she told me they rocked Every time from then on I walked in the room She’d run from the keyboard and pick up the broom The broom from her hands I smashed up the place “Take all of your poems right now and erase I’ve seen how he writes those poems for you He can just have you, get out and we’re through!” I read the history in ICQ Looking to find what I already knew I got to his name and read what they said But when I was done I was light in the head “Please don’t you write your love poems for me I’m happily married my husband might see” I thought we were friends, we were at the start Now you’re just hoping to waver my heart” “Come on you asked for all this attention Hubby don’t love you I think you did mention Besides I’ll just tell you, you’re one in a line Before its all over the chicks’ll be mine!” After reading these lines and just a few more I knew that my wife would be gone from the door I’m so glad that my life was turned on its side But with dogs out there lurking it’s better she hides! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hey Walt.....glad you expressed what you felt, after all that's what poetry is for. If I could get on my ICQ now (it's not working at the time  ) I'd contact you, so don't think I'm mad at you.  See you around.God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
OH BY THE WAY this isn't me and my wife at all! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Well, I am glad it isn't about you and your wife. *sigh* I am relieved that the love the two of you share is not going through this. Great writing......extremely powerful. Very well put. You sure know how to use words well. I almost got all emotional. Amazing work. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Walt, you are quite imaginative! Everytime I see a post from you on here I just have to click on it and see what you'll write about next! Good Write RP |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
wayoutwalt, I had a cousin that lived this experience with his wife. It ain't pretty. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very good, Walt. Sad to think that this actually happens to some couples, very sad. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Thanks guys hope it gets peeps thinkin what they are doing and it makes me examine myself for hypocracy. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm glad it's not you, walt - but there are many who'd have to admit that they fit the bill... and that part is sad - Well said - and not so wayout.. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Walt..you are a good person...I appreciate your sincerity...and as Liz said...that is what poetry is for...mostly we are harmless...and sometimes there are those that set out to undermine. Ulterior motives aren't pretty at all...especially when your loved one becomes concerned. The web has many scheming thieves. Thank you for caring. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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