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Give Me Your Tenderness, Passion's Fires.....
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Give Me Your Tenderness, Passion's Fires..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Tender is your touch upon my brow. I lie before you, my soul exposed to your eyes. You, smiling down at me, caress me. I am yours, do with me as you may. Circles of love's traces upon my chest. Lines of passion lingering as blood flows. Kisses tenderly placed ever randomly. Your hair covering my eyes as you explore. My heart races to a finish line unseen but by you. Holding my hand softly, you take me there. My trust leads me with you, I am yours to have. You call, my eyes awaken to your gaze. Will you always love me as you do? This softness, will it not ever go away? My mind, at peace within your caress. My resting soul sensually stiring as I wait. Give me your tenderness, passion's fire. Give your heart as I give you mine. Share with me your visions of ecstasy. Hold me softly as we rest as one from two. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is indeed a love poem...wonderful lines on display here  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a sensually romantic love poem about the love you and your wife share. I love it. A love like yours is a true pleasure to read about.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) BRAVO!!! SO BEAUTIFUL!!! Such a beautiful and sweet poem of eternal love that's bound to echo in her heart forever! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) You are a true romeo, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is most elegant and polished to a perfect shimmering glow of love! I will save this and return to it often. Bravo Magnus! Magical. Sincerely, Regina |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Baladeer, coming from a master, that is a nice complement to me. thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Karen, some tenderness is certainly expressed between us. Not always, but certainly so do we have tender moments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah...you always are so warm in your words. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful love poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Magnus, This is a beautiful write. I can only dream of someone writing such beautiful love poetry for me some day. Dawn |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful romantic poem this is. You write of romance so well. Lovely as always If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
smartchick....I am pleased that you liked this. I do enjoy writing romance like this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dawn....you certainly warrant the words. Hopefully someday one will speak soft words in your ears while holding you close and letting you feel so special. thank you for your comments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tracey: You are quite welcome for giving me such praise....thank you very much...happy you enjoyed this. [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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