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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-03 05:39 PM


A Magic Place

Yes there is indeed
a magic place
where love starts.

I remember watching her
across the silky space
of that magic place.

And I soon realized
I could barely take
my eyes off of her.

For her beauty
and her personality
were already taking me
to that magic place.

JamesLee
November03,2001
InspiredByStartimes
PoemCalled"LoveRests
UponTimelessShore."


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-11-03 05:41 PM




(smiles) Your beautiful heart reveals a magical place of true love and romance! (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! I love it! May true love forever bloosom in your loving heart! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-03 05:43 PM


Oh gosh this beautiful. Your sweetheart is very lucky that you found such a magical place to share with her. I feel honoured that you were inspired to write this from my poem. Someday I too will find such a place but until then I can visit there in the dreams and fantasies I weave. **hugs**  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2001-11-03 05:55 PM


Where love starts is indeed a magic place to be.  It's like a trip you hadn't planned to take and that you never want to leave.

Denise
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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:37 PM


Very beautiful, James! Lovely poem!
Tracey
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5 posted 2001-11-03 10:12 PM


What a lovely magical place that is indeed. There's nothing like the magic of new love, when your heart skips a beat when you see them. You write it very well James

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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6 posted 2001-11-03 10:53 PM


James,

Yes every place that love starts is a magic place. Beautiful write.

                                Dawn


rwood
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7 posted 2001-11-04 07:29 PM


Ahhh...now this is the beginning of a true relationship...to love one's personality and beauty...she must mix very well with you...So lovely James.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 11-04-2001).]

Enchantress
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8 posted 2001-11-04 07:33 PM


I just love magical places and this reminds me of one of them...Love.  Enjoyed.  Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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