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Love Rests Upon Timeless Shore
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Love Rests Upon Timeless Shore |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Love Rests Upon Timeless Shore Love rests upon timeless shore where moonlight forever shines A place for hearts who adore the taste of lovers sweet wines Two embraced in sweet romance upon silver moonlit sands In rhythm of ancient dance desire ignites in these lands Wrapped in velvet of these nights as the waves caress the beach Each kiss inflames and excites as heights of passion they reach Love rests upon timeless shore to be found within our hearts It’s there for all to explore a magic place where love starts Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes it does, for from the day Aphrodite arose from the sea foam and Eros crafted his magic bow, to the days of chivalry and knighthood, up to today, the magic of love exists on in each of us! (smiles) Very soon you will be embraced by a chivalrous, loving heart of gold, and it will be exciting to see the love you write then! (smiles) We all love you, sweet Karen! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Indeed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO  Love really is resting out there somewhere, waiting to find your ready heart. A beautiful poem, Startime.  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Just beautiful. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Startime, a lovely piece this one, I could hear the waves of passion as the moonlight reflected a heart of love, the sands of time awaiting the lonely traveler. Nice write. Sincerely Rick |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ahhh... very romantic, Startime, enjoyed reading... *smiles* ~Tier |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Love told, and revealed in the billowy rush of your passionate pen. Willie B |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Love's timelessness...hope of things eternal, things beyond...this is what people really want, I'd say. Beautiful poem. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, Karen, this is so exactly how it is, and should be. But when does it come to pass for us true romantics that would so appreciate it? Perfectly beautiful poem. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely write, Startime. It's always there, just waiting to blossom. All writing comes |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love this, Startime. This is just beaytiful. |
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