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For Thorn |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thru endless time & space she floated a lost spirit in search of whatever would make her whole~ sparkling, glowing, virtually unnoticed by those whom she passed by silent tears showering pearls upon the unsuspecting, granting wishes & dreams.... Tossed upon the wind here & there according to it's desire, offering sincerity to any who would accept sadness her constant companion masked always by a tender smile By chance she flew into his world A single light in a darkened place his beauty, breath taking causing her to falter, pause uncertain, poised fo flight... Melodies of his soul beckoned rocking her gently, soothing her, stimulating the thing that beat wildly within her His heart spoke softly, telling the history of his world, the struggle, the darkness, the need, as she kept up to his rythmic melody Together, rejoicing with tears crying out in pain, yeilding to ecstacy, caressing, floating, breathing, becoming one, touching, reaching out, swirling through the stars, together... Giving & recieving tenderness, sharing fears, kisses, & tears fingers entertwined, locking until needs were met somwhere upon the clouds.... Journeying through time and space She opens her heart & willingly bestows all of her love, strength, & courage into his It revives him, rejuvenates, turns his whole world bright she loves him, needs him, waits for him, because of him, forever~ she continues... ~Tier 8/97 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
   This is poetic beauty, a love story written by a shining star. One to save and savor. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Midnitesun... *smiles* ~Tier |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Together, rejoicing with tears crying out in pain, yeilding to ecstacy, caressing, floating, breathing, becoming one, touching, reaching out, swirling through the stars, together... Giving & recieving tenderness, sharing fears, kisses, & tears fingers entertwined, locking until needs were met somwhere upon the clouds.... Journeying through time and space She opens her heart & willingly bestows all of her love, strength, & courage into his' These are some fantastic lines, Tier...the images are just breathtaking, to say the least...this is one excellent poem! Very well written--the flow is beautiful! I love it! sp  And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Wow, Tier...this reads like a double shot of pure romance. I think I'll have another! Great write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Snowpants, Duncan, thank you so much for reading and even more so for enjoying... *hugs* ~Tier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Tier...James |
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Tali Junior Member
since 2001-11-03
Posts 21Michigan |
your poem is beautiful. I was touched by the words, the passion... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, James & Tali, I appreciate your taking the time to read... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done my friend. . . from your heart. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sven... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know that I've already commented here Tier. . .but. . . something told me that I should read this again. . . and made me realize. . . that this is how it should always be. . . and that we will always be looking for that one that we can give ourselves to. . . totally. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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