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Sadness |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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Skys are gray Leaves are falling A thousand feelings fleet pass My heart is breaking Just like the shattering of glass For the loneliness I feel deep Without someone to love me With no friends to stand by me Without the courage to face the future and the strength to stand alone A mess of feelings Bursting forth Without any gentle persuasion But the right kind of motivation Coz I am going back to another world One I would rather end sooner Raindrops are falling Just like I am crying Wiping away the tears gently Like a lover's touch Looking forward to the life ahead Optimism That is the word I should learn [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh I am glad this poem ended on a positive note because my heart was breaking for you. Sadness is a feeling I am very familiar with and you write about it very well. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
When I feel that my world's load is heavy, I try to remember those who have so much less than I. And it certainly helps to have a friend in your heart. You do, so many of them right here before your eyes. A beautiful poem. Thank you. May each day bring peace upon your heart and mind. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Startime: Hehe. One reason why I ended the poem on a positive note, coz I used to always believe in happy endings, and I don't quite know how to end a sad piece. Magnus: Yes, I agree. Through the years, I realised that though loved ones can't always be there all the time, as long as you have them in your heart, things won't seem so bleak. But I guess, there are juz times when that's not enough...  Thanks!! Thanks for the comments on this one as well.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you write me well |
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