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the last word
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Pointed finger rabid accusations stale illusions calculated words cutting like drama honed steel pointless to defend against an imaginary wrong sitting back then in better late than never wisdom I let you have the last word |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ This is VERY GOOD ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I have to agree with Marge. This is really concise, well written, and straight to the point. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
"in better late than never wisdom" ----------- I absolutely love this! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely composed Duncan ... direct and to the point, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes.... you have captured this well... I do enjoy reading your words and seeing how you use them to reflect the things around you... good stuff Duncan... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
wow, no holding back here, great job. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! This is excellent writing Duncan. Enjoyed! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This stings.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Very nice write. Enjoyed |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Pointed finger rabid accusations stale illusions Doesn't this express the late conditions just too well? A wise well-done piece..... Thank you *********************** |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes is better to let them have the last word, for the sake of love. Great poem. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I always get the last word....most of the time it is "yes dear" I like your poem....in relationships always let the last word stay a thought and get in the last hug. Of course if both people do this there will be little talk and a lot of hugs *S* Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Enjoyed this very much. Sitting back then in better late than never wisdom Love those lines. I often have that kind of wisdom. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
funny how you can read a piece, and later you realized you completely missed the entire meaning in text.... Kathleen (Kay) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice, got me thinking... |
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