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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-11-03 05:28 AM

Empty Vessels Fall Apart

You will remember me
Next time your bored
Yet when I had needed
You constantly ignored

My thoughts are plenty
With no words spoken
Having nothing to bind
My heart being broken

To be left falling apart
Empty without a smile
Having no time for me
Others loved your style

Within is heart sadness
Of spaces you left void
Also giving my honesty
Right now I’m annoyed

Playing upon the mind
Then sharing my heart
I’m hoping you realise
Empty vessels fall apart

Hope© 2001

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

1 posted 2001-11-03 08:10 AM

Well, this one struck a blow...very much enjoyed!

Willie B

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-11-03 08:19 AM

HopeS,
There is a fresh breeze up, why not a fresh start? Nice write.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2001-11-03 09:20 AM

Thanks for taking the time to reply Willie
yes it came as a blow to my heart
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2001-11-03 09:21 AM

Thanks seymour , yes they say time does heal
lets hope the breeze blows the pain away
Hope

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

5 posted 2001-11-03 09:29 AM

Men and women do not think alike (some ladies would say we don't think at all*S*) Poems like this sometimes help us see and feel what what women see and feel in relationships. Thank you Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-11-03 10:49 AM

Oh gosh, Hope, I am so sorry. I know how you are feeling and I can only say to hang in there. I hope time will heal the pain that you are now feeling. Just remember there are those who really do understand and who love you and I am one of them. You know where to reach me if you need to. ***hugs*** I love you, dear one.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-11-03 11:09 AM

The title is an entire poem in itself...enjoyed the power in this one...well described aching.
Yes, may the breeze blow away the pain.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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