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Open Poetry #16
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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
0 posted 2001-11-02 10:01 PM


Deep into mine your eyes search for reason
I blink as I stare at your gaze. You blink
Look further, but do not frown, we are human

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2001-11-02 10:05 PM

I really liked it...but got lost in the end... my loss, I'm sure.

jwesley
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-11-02 10:09 PM

Intriguing write, Daniel.  Thanks for sharing.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2001-11-02 10:12 PM

*grin* I felt like I was looking in a mirror. Well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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