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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 08:49 PM

twixt and tween

this day laughed in dance
giggling the last of summer along
seeing skip of wayward leaves
blown by warm southern winds
skiffing skirts of yesterday’s summer

this twixt and tween day

the kind one harbors in lineal
memories of recall, knowingly taking
in crisp smells of the briefest
moment to pull out warm like a chocolate
chipped cookie
‘neath winter’s milky cover

a smile in-between day

for feel-good-because-it-turns
upward reasons, no other
justification required, turn left
smack dab into pearly
whites, watching it multiply

kind of day

few and far between
this twixt and this tween
a crystalline scene
memories dream

kind of day

full it was, heaven scent
wisps to line recall
good it was, as night comes spent
in cool clean climes of fall
quiet now, dusk comes o’er
sunlight’s skipped on by
twilight blends heaven’s bower ~
sleep well midst angels sigh

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2001-11-02 08:50 PM

Sometimes the weather is such that there can be no complaining....I'm glad you enjoyed just such a day.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-11-02 08:57 PM

you've danced my heart
between light tricks
playing vision games --
you have seasoned
the breeze on my skin
with words turning
pirrouettes
blending

your verse is
indian summer
warming my spirit

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-02 08:58 PM

*sigh* just one of those beautiful days we never want to end. I love the way this poem made me feel. *giggling* and I like my chocolate chip cookies to be soft please.

**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-11-02 09:00 PM

Karilea--I am waiting for such a day...how beautifully your poem touched the feeling it gave to you.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-11-02 09:08 PM

sounds like a day filled with Sunshine to me..

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-11-02 09:20 PM

for feel-good-because-it-turns
upward reasons, no other
justification required, turn left
smack dab into pearly
whites, watching it multiply

kind of day

Yes indeed but every day filled in here with Sunshine is a wonderful day. Like today ... thank you and yes this likes me

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-11-02 09:26 PM

Karilea, It was exactly the kind of day here that you described. Warm for November, with the leaves skipping down the street..it was beautiful, just as you say!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2001-11-02 09:27 PM

Sometimes the words just seem to flow from you bright dear Sunshine, and meld with the forces around us - like they were meant to be - as these you've written above, do.

...cans't I say more
   than what touches me inside,
   warms my soul,
   lives in my heart.

   I think not
   for thou has silenced my words
   with  the beauty of thine own...
             jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-02-2001).]

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