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Crescent Moon
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Crescent Moon |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Crescent Moon would you come meet with me beneath the crescent moon and let the lingering light bath us in it’s magic spells as we drift upon dreams of sweet, and giving romance come let us take a walk beneath starlight where we will share hearts filled with love and heat of passions that burns within us come, please and take this open hand to guide me once again in ancient dance where two hearts will now become one when joined in lover’s kiss under crescent moon light that shines tonight for lovers Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write so nice Startime!! I enjoyed how you created the crescent moon. Where are those little clapping guys when I need them, I'm going to have to figure that one.  Lovely, lovely!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Well done! How do you get that circle. Please share that with me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
this is neat and I KNOW took a lot of doing! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BluesSerenade...Thank you, so much..as to the smilies if you look at the bottom of your page when you are responding you will see a little blue box that says "smilies insertable images HTML Help UBB Code Help and Topic Review....If you click on the "smilies" one you will see the codes for making the smilies. **hugs** Interloper....I start building them in microsoft works using the centering function...(any processing program can do it) then I put it on passions but preview it to make sure the shape looks right. For colors I use HTML codes. It can be time consumming but can also be quite rewarding when you get it right. **hugs** Lady of Shallot...*giggling* yes it does. I had to redo it dozens of times before I was satisfied. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BluesSerenade....another place to get smilies is here: http://www.plauder-smilies.de/ there are pages and pages of them...just click on the one you want and at the bottom of the page you will see the code for it in blue. You can copy and paste the code. Have fun.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Karen, I don't know what you have been putting in your bed time milk and cookies lately, but I want a double dose. I had a little trouble reading the orange words of the moon but after I got my bifocals adjusted to it it was well worth it. Some nights are magic and I just saw one in your poem. *S* Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You most certainly have given the moon its due...a spectacular view! Thanks for a lovely visual sight.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ah Star, but tis a full moon this eve.... You do poetic images so well. Your creativity and persistence is certainly noticeable. I like this. Romance said well in such a neat way. Can I hire you to do one for me...?? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah my friend, I'd meet with you and your beautiful words on cloud tops if need be... Loved it. jwesley |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
gorgeous display!!! really really nicely done..... *smile* i love how people can shape words with text to add to the meaning of the piece... you did a great job with this! |
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