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Interloper

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 12:35 PM

If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to
POST YOUR COMMENT
and send me an Email.

It is not my intent to offend anyone and I AM capable of editing almost anything.
~*~

she was a stranger
seldom visiting my ranch
but always around
~*~
accidentally
we met after a big fight
and she cleaned my wounds
~*~
she was so tender
so caring and beautiful
I could not help it
~*~
my hand brushed her shirt
she softly kissed my bruised brow
I kissed her bare throat
~*~
I pulled her to me
blind passion building in us
I staggered backward
~*~
taking her with me
unaware of surroundings
I fell I the trough

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

1 posted 2001-11-02 12:38 PM

sooooooooooo cute

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-02 12:41 PM

Ah poor Kit! Gee, Interloper I guess it's your height that makes you a bit clumsy, eh dude? LOL....good one....enjoying this, I am!
carry on....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-02 03:11 PM

*giggling* now that would surely put a damper on things. Oh gosh with this wild lover never succeed?

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-11-02 03:15 PM

Hehehe

It seems all these adventures have rendered you a bit clumsy! I hope Kit didn't end up in the trough too!

Still giggling away

~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2001-11-02 03:48 PM

Oh poor Interloper. Are you ok?

walker
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since 2001-02-11

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Florida

6 posted 2001-11-02 06:35 PM

Interloper. you've done it again, you Romeo you.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

7 posted 2001-11-02 07:12 PM

Sometimes the trough has to substitute for the shower.

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