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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 12:35 PM


If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to
POST YOUR COMMENT
and send me an Email.  

It is not my intent to offend anyone and I AM capable of editing almost anything.
~*~


she was a stranger
seldom visiting my ranch
but always around
~*~
accidentally
we met after a big fight
and she cleaned my wounds
~*~
she was so tender
so caring and beautiful
I could not help it
~*~
my hand brushed her shirt
she softly kissed my bruised brow
I kissed her bare throat
~*~
I pulled her to me
blind passion building in us
I staggered backward
~*~
taking her with me
unaware of surroundings
I fell I the trough

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-11-02 12:38 PM


sooooooooooo cute  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-11-02 12:41 PM


Ah poor Kit!  Gee, Interloper I guess it's your height that makes you a bit clumsy, eh dude? LOL....good one....enjoying this, I am!
carry on....

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-02 03:11 PM


*giggling* now that would surely put a damper on things. Oh gosh with this wild lover never succeed?

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
4 posted 2001-11-02 03:15 PM



Hehehe   It seems all these adventures have rendered you a bit clumsy!  I hope Kit didn't end up in the trough too!

Still giggling away
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2001-11-02 03:48 PM


Oh poor Interloper. Are you ok?
walker
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Florida
6 posted 2001-11-02 06:35 PM


Interloper. you've done it again, you Romeo you.
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Gaia
7 posted 2001-11-02 07:12 PM


Sometimes the trough has to substitute for the shower.
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