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For Midnitesun . . . Challenge response #11 . . . MODIFIED
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For Midnitesun . . . Challenge response #11 . . . MODIFIED |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Due to censorship, I am reposting this piece in a modified format so as not to offend the sensibilites of those readers which were offended by my work yet had not the intestinal fortitude to comment and show everybody they were offended. The original piece was removed without warning and without giving the author the chance to edit the offensive portion(s). ~*~ ~*~ Traveling up North No, farther North than that, Sven, I met this sweet gal ~*~ she was inviting warm and accommodating and in love with me ~*~ her customs were quaint living in a cold igloo has its benefits ~*~ trying to get warm everyone knows two bodies will warm each other ~*~ I will spend the night and this night is four months long anticipation ~*~ I have prepared though Ginseng and all vitamins That I could ingest ~*~ we covered with skins and slowly rubbed our noses ‘til I found her lips ~*~ what heat and passion steam arose from our bodies that’s when the ice broke Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this one, too bad the ice broke. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Though I certainly wasn't offended by the first version, you are so kind to rewrite this for her. (I didn't get the reasons, either...but who am I?) Again, great poem for a so sweet lady. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
nothing you write offends me  I like this....very nice....  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I didn't see anything wrong with the first write...but, hey, that's me! Now, do I have to explain again that you went further north than where Sven lives in Michigan? Hence the reason Sven is mentioned here? Okay...that being said...these are a lot of fun and very well done Interloper!! Carry on..... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Aww, you got in trouble? Well, I say it's all in good fun!  But I guess it's good to have a disclaimer, good idea. If you fell in the ice-cold water, wouldn't you need extra warming up now? You've no excuse this time!Hugs, ~Krista  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Walker ~ Yeah, I;ll bet you're all broken up over it Duncan ~ Thank you for the kind comment. I think asdkjfhfdf. Darn those censors! SEA ~ You are almost too easy to please. I'll bet naldhfiasd. those censors can go xammdfhklayh! Enchantress ~ Thank you once again for making that crystal clear so the censors will not persecute Sven for associating with me. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now. . . why was I mentioned here again???  I know that I offend a lot of people but. . . LOL ROFL. . . well, whatever form it's in oh Great Voice of the Southland, it's still a great piece. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I like them both but *sigh* the hotter one was very mmmmmm intriguing.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I wasn't offended! Too bad the ice broke. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HUGS AND KISSES to all of you  I wasn't offended and don't know what was wrong with the first version, which I didn't save, so there's nothing to compare this to. But thanks for reposting one, so I don't feel left out in the cold (pun intended). I didn't sign on for the Adult forum, since I have a teenager here at home. Of course, she says 'her board' probably posts sexier more explicit things that Pips anyway. LOL, as she is no doubt right. Now I'm really tempted to visit the Adult forum..... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The good news for those of you who missed the first version, is that our moderator didn't remove it, but rather moved it to a more appropriate home in the Adult forum - You can still read it there. Also, for the official administrative response on this issue, this thread, /pip/Forum6/HTML/000697.html should clarify any questions you all may have. I hope this series, which was given special exemption from our guidelines, continues in the spirit of good clean Passionate fun... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Well....I'm sorry...I know I missed the first post! I see you're Having a little azz with your azz!!! I had to do it! Hang...in there~pun intended!Sincerely, Regina |
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