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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 11:17 AM

uncommon good sense
she prefers the older man
gray hair will suffice
~*~
she can outrun him
she can outlast him by far
but that is not why
~*~
she wants to be loved
slowly and completely loved
satisfied, sated
~*~
but young men can learn
we, the smarter ones, have learned
to use a slow hand
~*~
‘neath the crescent moon
we met in dark bayou
moss hanging from trees
~*~
our lips meet warmly
passion spreads quickly, hotly
hungrily we kiss
~*~
make a bed of moss
lie upon the moss, submit
breath coming in gasps
~*~
my lips moving down
past her neck and to her throat
her moans exciting
~*~
lower still I kiss
and I feel her nudging me
but how in the back
~*~
no, it cannot be
she has a pet ‘gator, too
I am outta here

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-11-02 11:24 AM

What IS it with these women and them gators? Haven't they learned anything yet!?

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-11-02 11:25 AM

Unlimited imagination, thats what you have. A gator this time ROFL.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-11-02 11:28 AM

Hehehe

Tell her to leave the gator at home next time!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-11-02 11:34 AM

ROTFLMAO! Another alligator?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-11-02 11:35 AM

Listen I'm still waiting for a showdown. Maybe you should make your move indoors. No pressure there Interloper

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-11-02 11:40 AM

I have no gators
I promise not to bite....hard
only slow kisses

(is it my turn yet?!)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-11-02 11:57 AM

Lady ~
I try to learn every day. I have a Doctorate from the School of Hard Knocks

Sandra ~
Unlimited?  Well .... mnphslk.  There go the censors again!

Krista ~
Who knew?

SmartChick ~
Can yo believe it?

Walker ~
A showdown?  At high noon?  In the middle of the street?  Are you an exhibitionmsncjdot.
Darn those censors!

SEA~
I am saving you for last and I GUARANTEE that peice will either be censored or it will burn up the page

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-11-02 12:18 PM

Myself I've never heard of having a pet gator. Well, yes I did have one..once. Gee..can't wait to read Sea's!! Will it make it past the censors? Carry on....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-11-02 12:28 PM

ok I'll be patient.....you can always email me the out takes

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2001-11-02 02:48 PM

*giggling with total delight* you are absolutely marvelous....and I agree with serenity...older men are by far the best. LOL now chain up that gator.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2001-11-02 03:58 PM

That was no GATOR...evil grin...I think that thing is growing TEETH!!!

Thank you for poem, lovely one!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2001-11-02 07:17 PM

LOL again and again, you have got those gators chasing you now. Don't even bother going to Wakullah Springs, Florida. Gators everywhere! Serenity must have waved her magic wand in your defense.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

13 posted 2001-11-03 06:57 AM

Oh My! Hope you made it out unscathed! LOL!!!She got you!

Sincerely,
Regina

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

14 posted 2001-11-03 12:30 PM

*chuckles*

nicely done, Interloper...

~Tier

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