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Morning fairytale
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Morning fairytale |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You are the sun that warms on top porch step the blanket wrapped in solitude yours the voice I only imagine as we talk the body I hold tightly as we dream sleep with me here in this world of make believe happily ever after |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Duncan: oooh this is nice and tempting too! I like I like!! more please!!  Roniece |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, to wake up in such a warm, wonderful, romantic fairytale! Very nice, Duncan. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
*sigh* What a beautiful poem this is to wake up to with morning coffee. You southern boys sure know how to turn a girls head don't you? You always stun me with your words, your thoughts and your imagery. Tis a beautiful wold indeed, isn’t it? She sleeps in this fairytale so sweet When she dreams with you in her sleep And when she wakens to your words She sings with joy, you must have heard If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
what a beautiful way to start my day.... You DO have a way with the ladies dear sir. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Agreeing with the others...Very nice Duncan. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
although I have written that I am NOT a fairytale..I do believe in them... nice warm feelings here ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love fairytales even if they don't come true. This is a delightful way to start my day. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan- you were born to love and write about it. This is great. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
nothing at all wrong with a fairytale...especially one with this feeling. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sigh . . . wonderfully done, Duncan. All writing comes |
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