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He loves her ....and her too poem
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He loves her ....and her too poem |
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BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
He Loves You He Loves her too and her and her and YES She'll do As though the world were a grocery store he keeps on adding more and more More girls to love More poems to write he links them all to this site He tells them each and everyone I wrote this for YOU My ONE true love I wonder if they ever knew about the others what they'd do I've tried to tell him that it's wrong he has them wrapped on his every word which really is quite absurd It's kind of funny and it's fun to sit back and watch what he's done until I realize the saddest part these women will get a broken heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Great first post!! Look forward to seeing more from you! ~NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BldWhtRose~ Welcome to the posting side of Passions~ What an intriguing first post~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ahhhhhh!! words can be powerful, yes! but people are people and people know where they're going or wanted to go and so? perhaps it might be true........ perhaps he loves me more than you perhaps he loves them all, perhaps, and maybe there's no second guessing, much is more and less contesting Love, the great confusing jestered clown? no, just illusion festered on the brink of links of longing..... never judge therein, the wronging |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
so are you really new or are you someone that's been around awhile and knows what goes on here at this site. Casanovas please give it up!!! Awesome dead-on write |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love this....I welcome you to passions! but alas, I understand the flip side of this too---I too fall in love with everybody!!!!  Nice write. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
BldWhtRose, This is a great first post. I hope you will enjoy your stay here at Passions as much as we will enjoy having you. I know I can't wait to read more from you. Please check your e mail for a special greeting.  DawnG |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
"and maybe there's no second guessing, much is more and less contesting Love, the great confusing jestered clown? no, just illusion festered on the brink of links of longing....." I couldn't say it better than Doreen but I do feel compelled to add this little bit. Within my soul burns the heart of a romantic..and maybe I'm a bit naive but I believe love isn't real until it's given to someone else... and all we can do as friends/lovers/partners is return that love tenfold. If by twist of fate, they cannot give you the same love in return, then what else can you do but hope someone else will accept the heart you have offered? As this poem relates to me, I am guilty as charged but only because I have spent my life looking for and will continue to look for that one perfect soul who shares my romantic dream and completes me. I may have taken the wrong steps along the way, I may have fallen off the path, I may have tried to charge through the underbrush and blaze my own misguided selfish way (lol)... but the road still beckons ahead and I intend to follow it to its destination. the reformed "Casanova" perhaps? (lmao) (I love your comment Walt )- Jeff |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some do love many...and some will not stop until they find the right one... is that right or wrong...it depends on if the person is truthful and honest or if they are deceitful...I try to form relationships with those I can talk to face to face...it is easier to judge truth this way...James |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
He won't get ME....!! Great poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Looking forward to reading more! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I guess it only becomes wrong when at the same time he is telling them all the same thing and they are giving their heart to him. My heart goes out to the women who are deceived this way for their pain is real when they were just guilty of loving someone too much. Strangely enough my heart also goes out to the man who feels he needs to collect all these woman. He must be very insecure about himself to need reassurance of love from so many. I too seach for the one who can match my heart and soul but only one at a time and no married men or attached men please. This is a powerful first poem with a great message. Welcome to Passions. You will find the people here are fun loving and filled with great hearts. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
O yuh! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Dead on write... I know... I believed. Unfortunately, wide open eyes after the fact only allow the tears to flow more freely. Welcome to Passions, BWR! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
welcome! I checked out your site, you're lovely and looking forward to more posts....oh, and I agree wholeheartedly with Startime... this is It's a great entrance though! Don't let us scare you off, we're all hopeless romantics here -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi BldWhtRose, Welcome to Passions, I like the powerful expression expressed in this write, keep up the good work, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
welcome. . . it would seem that you've spakred a discussion. . . great job, please enjoy your time with us. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BlueIceKristahls New Member
since 2001-11-03
Posts 4 |
You Again, This is cute... too many people out there, are like this.... men and women, can't give their heart to just one... cause they are unsure who is the "right" one... so they share with everyone... Hope you weren't the one who got suckered by him ! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK, so when does flirting become hurting? That's what you have to ask yourself.. There are many hopeless romantics out there, writing love poetry sunrise to sunset to sunrise. Most of it is harmless, innocent, playful, fun, and mostly well received by those who read it willingly. But if someone claims each and every poem is for one particular lover, and then says the same thing to others at the same time??? Well, that sounds like an immature selfish heart to me, and one you might not want to involve yourself with. But don't be too judgemental, it doesn't solve anything or help anyone get passed this kind of hurting. And who can say what the other's motives were? |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
It's only at the internet That love can flow without restriction Be aware of whom you talk to It could be one with love addiction Nevertheless a great poem you wrote Welcome to Passions where love and friendship flow in many beautiful verses Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Jonnie...I've always loved your directness. He always said you loved to bust his chops. You know I agree with you wholeheartedly on this one. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"...love isn't real until it's given to someone else... and all we can do as friends/lovers/partners is return that love tenfold. If by twist of fate, they cannot give you the same love in return, then what else can you do but hope someone else will accept the heart you have offered?" i agree with jeff on the above.. i know only that i cannot judge lest i be judged..and i can only hope that what i get when i ask for honesty, is honesty..call me gullible, naive..i am those things..but i am a beleiver in love, and in people, and i tend to understand both sides at the same time..taking neither side in many cases.. this sounds like a dual with someone you love too much..someone you know you can slam without being shunned..only a true friend would take that.. however..it is good to see you here all the same.. i hope you take up residence to stay a while and i hope you like honesty..cause youre likely to get it around here.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is a great first post.Welcome to Passions. Peaches |
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