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For catalinamoon . . . Challenge response #14 . . . Isle of romance
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For catalinamoon . . . Challenge response #14 . . . Isle of romance |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
just twenty-six miles from that California bay lies Catalina ~*~ ‘tis better known as Santa Catalina isle island of romance ~*~ her raven hair shines framing face of an angel lips curled in a smile ~*~ our eyes locked at once challenging and inviting daring and sparkling ~*~ I floated, it seems, To her side and we held hands Walking on the beach ~*~ then around the point around the rocks to more sand then to gentle surf ~*~ a secluded cove known only by very few our spot of loving ~*~ as I reach around to untie bikini top through molten kisses ~*~ gentle surf rolling Rising from her breasts to chin our passion soaring ~*~ our bodies in sync unable to restrain more the kelp grabs our legs ~*~ kelp is so yucky slimy, sticky and clinging just ruined our day Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this one's  don't let anything kelp you from such a beautiful fantasy!! gooey and tangled might be fun  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
HELP it's the KELP!!!  Poor Sandra!! Why didn't you crawl back up onto the beach? LOL...carry on.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
LOL...nice "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh no, that's a shame. Betterluck next time. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 I sure hope your luck changes soon!!!!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Saved by the kelp!! *S* as I reach around to untie bikini top through molten kisses ~*~ gentle surf rolling Rising from her breasts to chin our passion soaring ~*~ our bodies in sync unable to restrain more and what am I supposed to do with all these hormones that had started to rage. Brought a smile with the ending *S*....I love poems that carry you in one direction and then poof you are on another planet. Dan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh good grief!! You didn't let a little grass between your toes stop this love fest did you? Oh, Interloper!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Cat's name has always made me think of this very special isle... but you always have been one to get tangled up in the fray.... you just never learn! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If you have never been tangled up in seaweed, you don't know the half of it. Seriously, people drown evey year when they get tangled up in kelp. This was an almost End of news flash! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Now You tell me WHO is going to get a hold of you. This is just too funny. You're on a role my friend keep it up. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* this one had me rolling with laughter. LOL Gosh I hope your luck changes soon.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Darn, I was just getting started, too. Sheesh, you gonna let a little kelp stop you... ROFL Love it, and for the record, this place is the inspiration for my screen name. Sandra(wishing I was under a catalinamoon tonight) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Whew!!!! You sure know how to get a girl going there don't you???? If it wasn't for the abrupt ending, I'd a been in a cold shower by now!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know, oh Great Voice of the Southland, I've been reading all of these from you. . . and you're really doing well. . . this one is great. . . the scene is wonderful. . . and you tell the story very well. . . keep 'em coming. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Hehehe  You get us all to swoon, take us to the moon, then we face the abuse as you think of some excuse! *sigh* I guess we just have to face the real facts, you're all foreplay and no grand finale! Giggling away and loving how you can twist your romantic escapades into a fit of laughter! Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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