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Oh Love, Where You Could Be?
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Oh Love, Where You Could Be? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh Love, Where Could You Be? By: Noah Eaton 11/1/01 Oh love, where could you be? My heart is aching, I need you so badly I’m too old to be a child, yet I’m too young to do anything I feel I can’t do anything but cry in my dreams Will I ever be able to love you before I die? I feel time is just pushing me aside I feel nothing can save me anymore I’ll never be able to touch your lovely face I adore I’m working so so hard But I feel it’s only breaking my heart I feel so weak I just want to cry in my bed all day And that the real world locks all my hopes away behind barricades Some say I should follow my dreams Some say that it doesn’t mean they are true, it is just melancholy I sound like a fool who’s hopeless in direction Coddled in illusions of my devotion I’m so lost… I need your hand… I feel loveless… I feel no girl loves me… Will I ever fall in love? Will I ever fall in love? Before my heart stops beating Before my heart stops beating? Will I ever get to see your face? Will I ever be kissed once? Will I ever get to feel the beating of your heart? Will I ever hold anyones hand? Will I get to sing to you how I feel? Will I ever get to hear you laugh? Will I ever get to wake up and see your face Reminding me of how happy I could be Will I ever fall in love? Will I ever fall in love? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
YOU, sweet young man with a heart so beautiful and tender, are what every young lady is looking for.... yes yes yes!!! you will find Love .... and when you find it, your lady will be truly blessed..... |
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Amused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 40 |
Great poem you have written here. Love hides in the most unique places at times, keep your eyes open, and your ears tuned, and that lovely true love you're searching for might just be out there for you to find.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh sweet Noah....you will find love...or it will find you. Not to worry, you have a kind and beautiful heart! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Your romantic words already have me swooning for you! Some girl is going to be very luck to have you! Love will come when you least expect it! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Noah looks like to me you have plenty of time left to fall in love...hope you enjoy the success of many wonderful friendships relationships until the day you and her fall in love...for it is through friendship that we can determine out likes and dislikes and prepare ourselves for love...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The answer is yes.... You'd find love.....and you'd fly on its wings..just be patient and your lovely wonderful heart would find its echos... Take care... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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