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For DawnG . . . Challenge response #12 . . . Seven veils |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
how can I describe Dawn’s moderator-like thoughts she is observant ~*~ but there is a twist how she likes to be observed using seven veils ~*~ her promising kiss leaves me sitting on bed’s edge watching the veils fall ~*~ one by one they fall taking an eternity but mouth-watering ~*~ late into the night and into the early morn she danced and teased ~*~ finally she’s done now its my turn to undress playfully she helps ~*~ she lays my head down and the next thing that I knew the alarm went off Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am enjoying these! This is great.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it, great ending. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
my, my, you really had me going there for a minute. great write. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well lucky Dawn got him away from the ants and lions and thorns!! Ohhh, dance of the seven veils....interesting. Carry on.... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Hey!!! Some one kill the alarm would ya. *giggling* better luck next time, Interloper.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a great one! I'm wondering, is she getting those veils all lined up for this dance? Throw the alarm away and let the music play? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interloper - the alarm went off? Does that mean the fire alarm or the alarm clock alarm? You were sooooo hot.....or your time was up? My, my, my. What a dilema. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Perhaps Dawn danced the Seven Veils...and lulled you in to another time... well done! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
LOL! You sure had me going. Better luck next time, interloper. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 I know, he's saving all the sequels for adult right? -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
LOL Interloper, Oh I loved this poem written especially for me. Actually though the alarm that went off was my 20 year old cat's pacemaker. Seems he was watching us (naughty cat) and it got his heart beating a tad too fast. Seriously though, I truly loved this poem and I'll be back with the seven veils when I'm more fully awake with a proper response. Dawn |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Darn those alarm clocks!  Better luck next time! ...although I highly doubt it by your track record!  Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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