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My Dream of You.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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MY DREAM OF YOU.... You visited me last night while I slept How happy I was to see you again I still grieve for you each day When I woke I remembered you had told me you would Always be with me Then I smiled for I knew you always kept your word How lucky am I to have had a Mother as beautiful As you... Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I feel that this is quite a sad poem, dreaming of someone who is no longer. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mon Cherie: Thank you for comments - I miss my Mother more than words can say but I know she is with me each day......Roniece |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I enjoyed this so much, good to see you, welcome if you're new! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A beautiful tribute to your mother. I can see you great love for her in each word of this poem. I love it. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece~ This is so tenderly done~ Big *Hugs* It's nice to see you here with us~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
God bless you. Your Mother doubtless waits for your company in etenity and watches to ensure you're content while with us. |
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Amber Dawn Junior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 22Minnesota |
Beautifully done. You expressed this with a quiet gentleness. My compliments |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Some of our best writings come straight from the heart and this one did for sure. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
This is nice, real honest words here |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Roniece, I lost my mother as a child, and now the mother of two girls, my biggest fear is not being here for them. beautiful tribute for your dear mother. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I lost my mother over 30 years ago and it feels so good to see her a dream. It doesn't happen too often but when it does...it is incredible...thank you for this one. Nancy |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments - it's nice to be writing again and I'm thankful that I can write my feelings for my Mother. Roniece |
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