Entranced (or Young at Heart)

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Open Poetry #16

Entranced (or Young at Heart)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-11-01 12:57 PM

Silhouettes illuminated in silver glow
lovers entranced, dancing so slow.
Melodious whispers on the winds
two hearts feeling young again.
Stars twinkling above in the skies
emotion felt through passionate eyes.
Moondust drifts gently to the ground
on this night renewed love is found.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-01-2001).]

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-11-01 02:17 PM

I don'r know how, but I almost missed this one. I am glad I did not. Love, laughter and tender feelings are not just for the young as you put it so well.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

2 posted 2001-11-01 03:24 PM

Being young at heart and having love renewed is great! Loved this!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-11-01 03:26 PM

Fairy tales can come true
it can happen to you
if you're young at heart
_______________
Beautiful work indeed.
I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-11-02 06:50 AM

Every word a melody! Such tinkling of the heart...this is like the sound of wind chimes on my favorite spot of my front porch. So lovely! Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

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