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My Travels: Valcartier
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My Travels: Valcartier |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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My Travels: Valcartier Have you ever seen magic falls deep within a dark wood? I have been there with trees for walls, beneath it's flow I stood It's way out where the roads all end deep in the forests green Leave behind this world as we wend to that which goes unseen Take my hand and let me lead you to a place for the soul You'll see water of deepest blue a pool shaped like a bowl We'll sit upon smooth rocks there refreshing our bare feet Sighing without a single care giving our hearts a treat North of a town where I once lived Valcartier is it's name This is the spot my spirit thrived now aren't you glad you came? Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...are you thinking of becoming a travel writer? James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Karen, it was a nice stroll you took us on, a memory that will stay with you for a lifetime, many of us collect but few of us share, thank you for sharing, much enjoyed and thank you for being a friend in passions. Sincerely Rick |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Another good one as always. Thank you for share this. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I want to go!!!! You painted a beautiful spot of serenity there in the woods. Enjoyed so much! Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I am glad I came on this travel with you. Now, I'm gonna be tempted to go visit it in real life. Lovely Karen If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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