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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 You play off key, polish the ivories- weep, write and still, nothing. Strum the blues on your '57 Gibson. ….sit on the sunporch, play subtle notes from a song you had written. It was "Felicity" remember? Then one day you decide you'll play a violin. We meet and soon hear a fever pitch we've never heard before. But before you play me, there's something you should know. I want to be fine-tuned first. That's right, bring the music to life- gradually. I am a sonata. I am a violin but I'm no fiddle.. when I arch my back? I want to be played like a Stradivarius... photo:www.bbc.co.uk/scotland/bbcsso/images/violin_lady. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh BRAVO!!!! This is so very perfect. I love the way you told how you should be played. Your talent never quits surprising me. You come up with the most incredible poetry. I love it.    Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
thank you dear, it's a release, felt damn good too -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
True words of how to treat any Lady. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello, Lady...your picture was not coming through, so I "fixed" it for you - hope you don't mind... but it has nothing over the words... well done! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hehehehehehehe  you're playin' my tune! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Rusty Knight, I believe so, thank you! Sunshine, thank you so much!! Doreen, it's every woman's tune right? Thank you! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You DO have a way with words My sentiments EXACTLY!Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
well done, both picture and words..great combination and yes, a woman should be fine tuned......what a great metaphor for foreplay. If I interpreted you correctly? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WOW!!! I love the message here and think every man on the face of the earth should read this and if it has to be explained to him.......Great write! Loved it, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I want to be fine-tuned first. That's right, bring the music to life- gradually. I am a sonata. Is there any other way to play such a fine piece? Thank you for the strength and beauty of this today. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Interloper, this one just sort of wrote itself. Thank you! Robert, yes foreplay of course, but well, can’t say that really I’m too shy (was) thank you for replying. Nancy, most men know, thanks for the neat notes! and for replying. Duncan, thank you for the kind words. The woman who wrote this has been released and she’d like to thank the person who did it…. someday maybe she will be able to. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
this is fine tuned writing...music to my ears...James |
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