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Just for Doreen . . . as I promised . . . Melt into my arms . . .
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Just for Doreen . . . as I promised . . . Melt into my arms . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Virginia lady southern belle of all my dreams please alight my coach ~*~ take my proffered hand walk with me to the meadow listen to nature ~*~ lift your chin to me accept the press of soft lips melt into my arms ~*~ now back to the coach we shall go farther next time to picnic I mean Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OHMYGOSH!! I'm sorry, I peeked! I know, I know, it says it is for Doreen but I couldn't help myself and am I ever glad I opened it!! YES!! You must go further next time..  to picnic I mean. Um...er...very nice writing here...um...thanks, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
geeeezzzzzzzz *sigh* wowowowow!!!!! teehee *grin* *blush* *giggle* *smmiiiilllleee* ahhhhhh soooo sweet of you!! thank you!!  I am honored !!! (just think... this is all it takes? i just have to put it in writing that i'm pretending all the love poems are for me and then i get them written for me??? who woulda thought? LOL!!!! is that how all these ladies get poems written for them? i guess i'm learning something new every day... *grin* and i thought real love affairs were going on!! geesh) but anyway... again.... thank you!! seriously, it is truly lovely!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh and pssssst.... let me know when you're ready for that picnic.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interloper - if I am really quiet and avert my eyes at the proper moment, can I carry the picnic basket? Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
very romantic, lovely way to honor Doreen. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!! Now this is a poem that would melt anyone and I can see it has already melted Doreen. Have fun on the picnic guys. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
hmmmm, thinking of changing my name. very very nice.... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, this is so sweet and romantic! (smiles) I bet Doreen's heart has melted since she read this! (smiles) May you always share this friendship picnic, as we all will too! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just don't tell the rest of us where and when this picnic is, unless you want a really big audience. What a great poem!Doreen must be drooling about now. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
My, my...Doreen you are a lucky lady indeed to have this written for you!!! Interloper, you can see we are all enchanted by these thoughts. I would imagine this would indeed be a magical picnic. If you ever do go on one...may I suggest a duet to tell us all about it??? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Interloper~ You realize what this means don't you? You must write us all a love poem!  We're just swooning from the one you wrote Doreen...you don't want us to be jealous do you?  Hehe, just kidding!  This is very sweet Interloper. Doreen is truly lucky Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I second that emotion - there's a challenge there Smitten Kitten, can he do it? A love poem for all the ladies in Passion? Well, this one was for a lovely lady, and you did it beautifully. Perhaps, you can do one under a willow tree, in a field of flowers if you are taking requests This was beautifully done Interloper.~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Interloper, This is beautiful. Doreen is one lucky lady. Have fun on the picnic you two. Dawn |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Now, you didn't think this picnic was going to get so crowded. Great poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I just followed the ants... And found Doreen at the picnic, with her laptop, clicking in on this time when everyone wasn't looking! Very good! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Aha, I see, yes I must get in line, then..LOL Sandra |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't even begin to tell you how jealous I am........ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so sweet, Interloper! Well done! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You are so sweet. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Aha! So THIS is where it all began. The line starts here, is that right? Write on! |
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