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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-11-01 08:03 AM

IF I COULD WRITE MY HEART

If I could write my heart
like the beauty of a
Rembrandt or perhaps
of a symphony of
the finest masters
I would write a
pallet of colors
and an orchestra
of sounds for the
world to see and hear.
If I could write my heart
it might be of the breathtaking
beauty of a tide breaking
along the shorelines
under a moonlight sky
or perhaps it would be
of a sunset against
a backdrop of mountains
rising as two lovers
take in the stars
from below together
for the first time.
If I could write my heart
per chance it would be
of gentle breezes
touching the face
of a loved one
so far away
as they listen to
the sounds of a
heart beating in the
distance.
If I could write my heart
of love that touches
my spirit and weaves
it's warmth into my soul.......
I would write~ of you.

(repost)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-01-2001).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-11-01 08:09 AM

Beautifully composed Gentle Spirit ... a lovely flow and such heartfelt sentiments, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-11-01 08:15 AM

Kit, thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for taking time to read and reply!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

3 posted 2001-11-01 10:03 AM

This is a good one. It refreshing and reads smooth.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-11-01 10:05 AM

*sigh* if only I could paint a picture just a little bit as beautiful as you have done in this poem. This poem is stunning. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Robert A
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

5 posted 2001-11-01 01:30 PM

I guess all writers want to write their heart, but you know something? The best ones write around it, that way they feel protected. This sounds like you wrote through it.....

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

6 posted 2001-11-01 02:29 PM

Beautiful........a wonderful gentle flow to this taht carried all the way through it.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2001-11-01 02:40 PM

Breathtaking

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-11-01 03:12 PM

I think you just did

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2001-11-02 08:15 AM

A work of art...just as pretty as your heart!
Oh..somy~ You are flowing so lovely these days...I'm so glad you're here. Just wish I had more time...Keep penning these beauties!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2001-11-02 08:25 AM

I like this. This is very good.

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