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devina
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0 posted 2001-10-31 11:11 PM



One Evil

Beyond a murky twisted mask-
Lies fallacy in evil’s path…
Of one, no sound shall ever come-
‘Nor breath of useless idiom…

The gaze of saints won’t reconcile-
It’s treachery, delinquent wiles…
Cast no shadow to its bend-
Forever blowing, molding wind…

Mere contradiction in its terms-
Weakens society at lower forms…
Grated pavement, once concrete-
Forms alliance of corrupted beat…

So ask yourself, Need it be?
One evil thrives, therein Money…


repost...yet still the same...*sigh*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-31 11:26 PM


BRAVO!!!A masterpiece of writing that touches the reader with it beauty. Very well done. I really like this poem.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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