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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2001-10-31 07:15 PM

These walls of hibernation
chilled with dreariness

I venture out
to the top porch step

warmed by an autumn sun
I daydream of you

and will the moment
to never end

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-31 07:19 PM

*sigh* such romance flows from pens tonight. It seems the fullness of the harvest moon and the warmth of a setting autumn sun turns hearts to longing for someone to hold close to their hearts. I love this poem. Its tender beauty touches me softly.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-10-31 07:23 PM

it's a wonderful feeling about ceasing time..I love that thought.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

3 posted 2001-10-31 10:13 PM

and will the moment
to never end

sigh.......................

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-10-31 10:49 PM

We have all had those moments so perfect we wished for time to stand still....you describe it well, sir.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-31 10:52 PM

Duncan, very very well done! Enjoyed, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-10-31 11:13 PM

*sigh* I know this daydream so well, I know this moment so well. You put it so beautifully and tenderly Duncan
moments like this kissed by the sun
daydreams so lovely , hearts will be won
wanting the moment to live on like this
she may be also dreaming this bliss

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-01-18 07:24 AM

To think
that we can will moments...
or anything else...

ah, the fallacies we
set ourselves up for...

only to hope, again.

Darn it Duncan...
you're a great read.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2003-01-18 10:17 AM

To think
that we can will moments...
or anything else...

It sure seemed possible at the time.

Thanks Kari.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-20 04:13 AM

great reading here in the back pages...I like this one much!

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