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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2001-10-31 06:03 PM

~*Rock This Heart*~

Awake
This sleeping heart
With gentle kiss of cheek
Tenderly whisper...'Come with me'
Then guide this wayward soul into the light
Weave fingers 'round this calloused hand
And kiss these chilled lips warm
Love...rock this heart
Awake

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-10-31 06:20 PM

It does kind of feel like that...very cool line.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-11-01 01:03 AM

VickyChicky~ A perfect rictameter of love!

Love awakens so much in us...that we often didn't even know was there before. Wonderful write!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-01 07:37 AM

This is lovely Vicky. What a perfect way to describe loves awakening. This sings softly like a lullaby

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-11-01 08:15 AM

Oh Vicky ... very beautifully written! The flow was just lovely, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-11-01 08:17 AM

Lovely flow Vicky, and so well written. Enjoyed this much!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-11-01 09:28 AM

Vicky~ this would make for an excellent song...how beautiful!!! I love the feelings here. Very much

Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

7 posted 2001-11-01 05:18 PM

I love what you have created here, the words and the arrangement are just fabulous.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2001-11-01 05:24 PM

I normally do not use vulgar words to describe something...but darn! This is good! No. Excellent!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2001-11-01 05:33 PM

Vicky--I agree with the language of the lady above..wonderful poem!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-11-01 07:10 PM

WHOOOOA! tricky girl, that one gave me chills....!! wow! i like a lot.... a whole lot....

hope love rocks your boat soon....

believe in your dreams...love will come

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-01-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-11-01 08:54 PM

Vicky~
You definitely Rock the Rictameter right off the rhyme scale~
Nobody does 'em better~
This is so elegantly excellent~
Love ya', gal~
*Hugs*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2001-11-04 11:28 AM

oops..did i bump that?

teehee... lv,g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2001-11-04 11:36 AM

BRAVO!!! THIS RICTAMETER "ROCKS"!!! (smiles) May this true love forever blossom in your heart sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2001-11-04 12:29 PM

enjoy

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2001-11-04 12:53 PM

Oh, I loved this one, Vicky. Wonderfully put.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

16 posted 2001-12-31 02:36 PM

Oh Vicky!
You have outdone yourself again! Can you do no wrong? LOL I love it! Gave me goosy bumps all over the place!
Love ya
Cindi

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

17 posted 2002-02-11 08:41 AM

Wonderful!

Jon

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

18 posted 2003-09-25 05:02 PM

This is a beautifully penned rictameter Vicky

Enjoyed.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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