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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-31 05:05 PM



She whispers to me
softly caressing my ear
with her words of love
~*~
I whisper question
Her response amazes me
please change my name sir
~*~
I have heard stories
Said she confiding in me
Of other conquests
~*~
they must be rumor,
said I in haste, I am chaste,
dear, by circumstance
~*~
I mean by my choice
I will show you what I mean,
Let us go picnic

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-10-31 05:09 PM


AWC....soooo lucky you are *Pouting* this is so lovely!!  
Decaflame
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2 posted 2001-10-31 05:17 PM



What a line, what a line....

keep fishing!

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
3 posted 2001-10-31 05:21 PM




~~~SIGH~~~

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
4 posted 2001-10-31 10:18 PM


Oh My !!!!

What an honor you have bestowed upon me. This is exceptionally beautiful.

Thank you.....tender kiss upon your cheek.

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-10-31 10:39 PM


"I will show you what I mean"
NOW...this is interesting....very interesting.....carry on!  Nancy.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2001-10-31 10:47 PM


This challenge is certainly agreeing with you Interloper. How you keep coming up with all these lovely verses is beyond me.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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Canada
7 posted 2001-10-31 11:15 PM


WOW!!!This challenge is bringing out the passionate romantic in you, Interloper....and I like it..I like it. *giggling* more please  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
8 posted 2001-11-01 12:14 PM


Romeo~ You've done it again....*sigh*  there is no doubt about it, you are a true romantic.  And one with a great sense of humour!  

Hugs,
~Krista


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 11-01-2001).]

rwood
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Tennessee
9 posted 2001-11-01 06:55 AM


SSSSShhhhhwwwweeeetttt one! Picnic? No ants I hope. You gathering your harem? LOL! Okay...looks like you're doing well enough.

Sincerely,
Regina

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2001-11-01 11:49 AM


My oh my, but you really are a busy guy! And you should see the line at your door, ants and all.      You've started a very fun thread, worthy of some kind of annual award for 'Passionate Poet' and it just may take you a year to get through this line of ladies.
  

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-01-2001).]

walker
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11 posted 2001-11-01 01:22 PM


Beautiful.
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