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For Elizabeth Santos . . . Chlng response #8 . . . In gratitude
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For Elizabeth Santos . . . Chlng response #8 . . . In gratitude |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Elizabeth, sweet Elizabeth I sit almost embarrassed to death. You think my deck is loaded for sure. That's what Acme said in their brochure. Methinks you had better watch your back I will sneak up on you with a sack throw you in and tie it up real tight, only to protect me against your bite. When I release you, in gratitude you will throw your arms around this dude, covering my face in wet kisses, asking me to make you my missus. Your sincerity overwhelms me now the police come and I must flee. ~*~ An aside: If you knew how hard it was for this Texas boy to use the word "dude" you would appreciate this much, MUCH more  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe  don't like the word Dude huh? Well you're one cool Dude Interloper  I never expected you to accept such a challenge and look at you! You're doing it with flying colours! Tired yet Romeo?Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I am sure she will show great gratitude for the hard work and talent you have put into this poem, dude.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper...That Liz is pretty good at seeing into the person behind the poetry, isn't she?...she one fine lady...and I think you're a pretty cool dude yourself. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Hey Dude...you'd best get busy...you've only another 2500 or so lady poets to get to... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hah! Good for you Decaflame, maybe he needs an alphabetical listing? Great job yet again Dude! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh,oh, it's the cops!!! I better get out of the bushes and head for the hills. Geesh, it was just getting interesting. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper!! You cool DUDE!!! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Interloper Eight and counting, what a chore Now you've got three hundred more No need to bag me with a thud For I have got Houdini blood I cannot be bound or wrapped I’ll let someone else get trapped Too bad I called you Mr Roper Larry’s much more apropos-per Thank you for the poem, dear Texan Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Okay, OKAY. I give up! Who is Mr. Roper and who is Larry? If yore talking about Larry of the three stooges, you iz in gr8 big trubble ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute!!! (*and you must be VERY young if you don't know who Mr. Roper is!) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Poet DeVine, Maybe I'm just old and stoopid And I still don't know ... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Interloper Mr. Roper and Larry were two characters on a TV comedy called "Three's Company". Mr. Roper was a neighbor who had given up all notions of romance, to the chagrin of his wife, who tried everything to get him interested. Larry was a friend who went after anything in a skirt, and on a bet, one time wooed a seventy (or so) year old woman, confusing her with the one he was supposed to date. He complimented her perfume, and asked what fragrance she was wearing, The answer, "BenGay" I hope this clarifies my poem Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, Elizabeth, it does. Now I am afraid quite another gauntlet has been cast down and when I have time to pick it up, rest assured I shall ... presupposing the presence of enough energy Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
heeheehee Interloper, you said "dude" this is great! I like this very much. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... this was terrific Interloper, and a great response from Liz. Challenges well met! Best wishes, /Kit |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dude!!!!!! You are so way cool....LAUGH. You are doing well with these Mr. InterLover! This is much fun. Hang in there...many more to go...then you have to start all over! Sincerely, Regina |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Interloper, you are one cool "Dude". |
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