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Out of Control |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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*I'm not experiencing this,just made this one up since I know there is women out there who put up with guys who don't treat them right* Out of control behavior It's disgusting, it's appalling Still, like leaves fluttering down For you, I'm falling In mid fall i'm plummeting Wonder as to where I'll land Like a plane dropping from the sky We're all in God's hands Your disposition just like a tv show Blink-changing moods Another instant-Another episode That heated agression That demeanor you can't control Unexplainable as to how or why I'm attracted to you though Your good side Makes me float in your presense My whole being is captivated Surrendering to your essence Love's really a drug that explains why I'm addicted Memories are where the pain lies Of the hurt that you've inflicted |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This may be a fantasy for you....of which I am thankful....BUT....it is to true. Nicely written... |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Deeply moving for those women who put up with this type of treatment. Once again I've enjoyed the reading! Do or die! |
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Amber Dawn Junior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 22Minnesota |
The lines that captured me were "Unexplainable as to how or why I'm attracted to you though" My compliments. I felt that was the key, put in nicely. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Joanna, I know just how you feel; sometimes we are so much lured into the inner-beauty of love and we feel the sweetness of it and it can too be troubling though we feel the joy behind it! (sigh) Wonderful thoughts, sweet friend, may your heart always blossom with love! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Magnus: Thank you for reading and responding, I've read every poem of your so far and I am very inspired by you. : ) Domzi: Girl I luv ya! You can relate to any poem I put out there, thats awesome! : ) Thank you and I can't wait to see another poem from ya! Amber: Hey there! Welcome to passions! Im sure you will love it here and get addicted to it just like me hehehhe..thank you for your reply, I'll keep an eye out for your poems! Noah: hi my darling angel! You always give me the sweetest compliments and make me blush! : ) THANK YOU FOR READING MY POEMS. ((BIG HUGE HUGS))) luv ya [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
this poem hits on a subject that i am sure many can relate tooo..... it is an excelent write.... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a very good poem. Very well written. And, it is so true. I know very well how this feels. Thank you for sharing this. |
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