Just for Mysteria . . . the challenge continues . . . Under the Willow tree

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-30 10:55 AM

Mysteria dreams
of a flower filled meadow
and a willow tree
~*~
I bend over her
whispering softly in ear
she naps in my arms
~*~
softly kissed forehead
peck on the nose, eyes open
warm lips reach for mine
~*~
the sweet warm embrace
fuels fires of passion withheld
trembling we explore
~*~
deep sounds in your throat
serve to heighten our ardor
when the lightening strikes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-30 10:55 AM

Yikes.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-30 10:57 AM

*sigh* I don't know how many of these I can read. Oh gosh she will swoon from your gentle but passion filled words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-30 12:34 PM

Oh my! I am sure you can do more than three women in one day! Oh....sorry, I meant, write a poem for more than three women in one day!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-30 12:37 PM

LOL! I thought I had a good reply 'till I read what Enchantress wrote....I'll leave it at that.
Mysteria, I can see your warm smile all the way up here.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-10-30 01:13 PM

Mmmmmm, lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-10-30 01:15 PM

Hehe

This is crazy.

*jealous*

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-10-30 02:27 PM

Ok, now I know this is really going to be a fun series. Delicious one here, sir.
andra

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-10-30 03:26 PM

Wow!           Is this for me?

Interloper you have NO idea how much I needed this.  Not only was this a simply beautiful poem that would make a woman's heart sing, but you actually succeeded in making my mind drift off under that willow tree, but seeing this is a family site, I better not tell you what happened there.        Thank you for this poem - gee, what else do you do on request? LOL!

Now, now ladies,          I meant as in songs!

Thanks again, this was simply lovely, and I have saved it for a rainy day!

p.s. ~  Oh my, I got so excited I forgot to say Sir, that you rose to the challenge, hehe!  Who is now up next?

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-30-2001).]

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2001-10-30 06:56 PM

This is beautiful, continue on..

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-10-30 09:14 PM

Beautiful Interloper ... I haven't had time to respond to all, but I've been reading each and every wonderful Senryu ... well done! Loved Sharon's response, LOL ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

11 posted 2001-10-31 01:46 AM

Interloper~ Hehe, man! You sure don't take a challenge lightly do you?

Well you are more than up to the task in my opinion! This is beautiful and so perfect for Mysteria.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

12 posted 2001-10-31 02:33 AM

You're writing a poem to every woman in Passions??????

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW

Great job

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

13 posted 2001-10-31 06:57 AM

"Sigh"...........again.......okay....You win whatever challenge there is!

Sincerely,
Regina

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

14 posted 2001-10-31 08:49 AM

Don't forget me (this is lovely, by the way) I could use something right about now

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

15 posted 2001-10-31 08:55 AM

Awww! This is so sweet and romantic. I know she is just going to love it. This is a very good poem.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2001-10-31 06:05 PM

and again you melt my heart, with mushies for another gal

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