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Open Poetry #16

Ripples

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-30 09:36 AM

Ripples

With a glance or a word it starts
reaching out to touch
A rapid beating of two hearts
seeking romance to cluch

Moans and sighs are blending as one
from their touch, taste and sound
As lover's share the setting sun
with beauty all around

Words tumble as feelings ignite
inner visions awake
Kissing under a starlit night
love's nectar each partake

From ripples in a gentle pond
sending soft waves flowing
A word began the unique bond
of passion's love growing

Karen Torbiak 2001©

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2001-10-30 09:51 AM

This is just beautiful. I love to read your poems.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-30 09:52 AM

(big hugggssssss) I remember this so well; such a beautiful echo of passion your golden heart creates! (smiles) May the whispers of his heart meet yours and have your heart singing with love forever! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2001-10-30 11:18 AM

This is Great!!!!!!!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-10-30 11:19 AM

Beautiful write startime! *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-10-30 06:48 PM

Gentle waves caressing brows of lovers two
Taking each along a scene familiar and not new.
Linking hearts as one as each shudders a sigh
Thinking inwardly as each rests....saying
OH MY...OH MYYYYYY.

Nice write of love and passion which you
do so well dear Star.

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