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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2001-10-30 12:51 PM


Write a poem of love for you..
my friend.. your probably right.
The people I hold closest?
Those that make me laugh in life.

Good humor is a turn-on.
There's no need for muscled arms.
No need for you to worry.
You can just count on your charms.

You might not have a six-pack
or a chest like sculpted steel.
You have all you'll ever need.
Great poetic sex appeal.

So if this is your vision,
well, then you were right my sweet.
All this love to you I'll show..
'cause I'll never claim defeat!!!

© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-10-30 01:04 AM


Lucie,
Oh my, oh my, oh my!!!  

It happened at the very start,
This jousting with a little tart.
It could all end even today,
But I want the very last say.



Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-30 01:29 AM


How did she know about that no-chest-of-steel business? Have you been emailing secret photos? watch out for the   players, they're looking those photos for a wanted poster. (Wonder what you are wanted for?)  
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-10-30 01:35 AM



Hehehe looks like we've got some romancing going on here!  Can't wait to see what pops up next!

Laughing my butt off,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
4 posted 2001-10-30 06:44 AM


Nice to read this kind of romantic banter, I don't seem to be any good at it!  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
5 posted 2001-10-30 07:31 AM


This is great! Please more...for us voyeurs! LOL!  

Sincerely,
Regina

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-10-30 08:31 AM



Whoops!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
7 posted 2001-10-30 09:11 AM


*giggling* Oh how very well said. I love it...too fun...you two are an absolute blast. *giggling* just like a man to want to have the last word.    

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.


[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-30-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-10-30 07:55 PM


Lucie~
Cute as cute can be~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
9 posted 2001-10-30 07:59 PM


Lucie...I love it, I love it, I love it!!...Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
10 posted 2001-10-30 08:06 PM


Can't turn my back for a few days or whoops, a romance is going on, or at least I think it is  

Nice poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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