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Bewitched (inspired by Serenity)
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Bewitched (inspired by Serenity) |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 I am a wisp , fine opulent lace draped across your life….for just a time. Or am I Serendipity! Kismet? An ill wind, impending doom? No, I am your daylily, plucked from the storm! And you, a wordsmith deny the remedy while penning a versed elixir, write me a fine bouquet. How I drink every syllable! Am I your resonance? I know my throat is raw from ruby whispers- my heart beats to the lilt of bluebells my soul writes a subtle invitation for unworried desire….and yet… You are so brave, so loving and so persistent! You untie my evening hair, refine an emerald dove fill me with saucy August heat drench me with intoxicating sweat….. your hands liquefy my frost…. Oh! You pass through me at twilight! Bewitch me at sinful dawn! You, my partner in verse my muse my memory…. live beyond my words.. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- photo: www.nightsirens.net/ rosemariepatriciasirens.html [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A nice, flowery piece  Well done.Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Very nice! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a compliment to be a source of inspiration for something so lovely! I thank you Lady S!!! With a bow of the head and a curtsey to you! Indeed, it is the season of the witch....  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I felt a lot from this one, Lady S, you always say such wonderful things. The ruby whispers got to me.. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooo beautifully inspirational and lovely, sweet friend! (smiles) Ruby whispers and emerald doves really grabbed my attention daydreaming of this surreal vision! (big hugggssssss) Beautiful, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
are you a good witch or a bad one! ha ha ha Dennis |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is very bewitching! Loved it! Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Thank you all, one of my favorite tv shows was "Bewitched" I loved Samantha! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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