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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-10-30 12:13 PM

Whispers
I see their reflection
In vibrant colors,
In painted clouds
In fall leaves dancing
On roaring winds
In clock towers
That chime daily faces,
In fragments of music strummed gently,
Unreachable to my fingers yet
My eyes begin to softly cry
Look deeply into the
Emerald world
They reveal what you seek,
Found in
Secret places of the heart
The one only you know
When the wind speaks listen
The best time, early morning
Before the mist rises,
You live in my embrace,
In my vision of beauty,
On the wings of angels
In captured images
I no longer can find,
How long can we keep our rapture?
Feel this,
Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue
When life was innocent
And I call to you
Come back, and listen
Return to time

Still

Move closer
Touch the water
Remember
I have loved you beyond time
Stir it slowly
You are part of it
You live within my embrace

~~
*****

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-30-2001).]

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-10-30 12:52 PM

"When the wind speaks listen
The best time, early morning
Before the mist rises"

I love those thoughts...nature has so much to say, we just have to listen.

You have laid out a beautiful procession of thoughts..each one filled with vivid imagery and a flow so soft and gentle that it's almost like a whisper on the wind

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-10-30 01:03 AM

Nature, amazing isn't it? So many ways it speaks to our souls without saying words. Enjoyed this write a great deal.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-10-30 01:39 AM

Beautiful imagery and whispers of love.

"Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue
When life was innocent
And I call to you
Come back, and listen
Return to time"

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2001-10-30 01:59 AM

Greeneyes,
Images from a place where we like to be applied to a place where we long to be! Nicely done.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-10-30 06:24 AM

Lauren, your heart you pour out through your words dear one. I have the feeling that this one is very special to you.......as it should be. Wonderful written emotion. Be well friend.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2001-10-30 06:34 AM

The title lured me in to an enchanting love poem
Very, very beautiful verse full of lovely phrases
Liz

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

7 posted 2001-10-30 06:36 AM

I felt this was being read to me, what a great feeling...and thank you for signing my guestbook, I appreciate it!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-10-30 07:22 AM

Lovely write, Lauren. Beautiful images.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-10-30 08:34 AM

In fragments of music strummed gently,
Unreachable to my fingers yet
My eyes begin to softly cry
Look deeply into the
Emerald world
They reveal what you seek,
Found in
Secret places of the heart
The one only you know
When the wind speaks listen
The best time, early morning
Before the mist rises,
You live in my embrace,
In my vision of beauty,
=================================

Feel this,
Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue
When life was innocent
And I call to you
Come back, and listen
Return to time

Still

Move closer
Touch the water
Remember
I have loved you beyond time
Stir it slowly
You are part of it
You live within my embrace
===============================

time and time again ...you write my heart...
god this is so damn beautiful L.
and it showcases your gift of pen to write such softly stunning images that float down to the reader and carry them away to a place of inner peace in your whispers.
exquisite my friend...absolutely emerald-enchanting

me

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-10-30 07:47 PM

you play these images so well. . . I'm constantly amazed. . .

superb. . . beautiful. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-10-30 07:50 PM

Lauren~This is exquisite! I adore it! Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2001-10-31 11:03 AM

"Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue"

I wish I had written these lines. Just lovely, Lauren.

*hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Robert A
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

13 posted 2001-11-02 12:42 PM

I'm a music lover from way back....thanks for the memories

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2001-11-02 01:40 PM

Such soft and romantic music
you're writing Greeneyes~

Brings to mind the song from
'My Fair Lady'

I could have spread my wings and done a thousands things I've never done before.
I'll never know what made it so exciting, when all at once my heart took flight~~~

I ooooonly know when he began to dance with me, I could have danced, danced, danced
all night!!  ha!!

Now see what you've started?

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

15 posted 2001-11-05 06:57 PM

There are those that write of the heart and then there are those that make us see and feel what is in their heart through their pen and the later would be you. Wonderful verse filled with the power and magic of love that only a heart that understands could spill forth. Truely a splendid piece of work.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

16 posted 2001-11-05 10:06 PM

This is so softly beautiful with fantastic imagery ~ you have a rare talent for writing about nature and love

It's a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

17 posted 2001-11-06 02:00 PM

Thanks to all that read and responded...I appreciate your words, comments, and thoughts very much....it makes writing and posting here worth it....sorry it took me so long to get back, we had a death in the family, and I needed/need to be with them right now....

peace and love to all...be well be safe...

always

Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-06-2001).]

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

18 posted 2002-04-09 02:06 AM

Lauren,

Again just beautiful. I'm so glad I FINALLY started to pay attention and read your words

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-01-20 04:23 AM

very soft and sensual...good write

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