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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
I said I loved you, You said you loved me, You let me down. You said you cared, You lied to me. You said you would give me love, You hardly ever did. I tryed my hardest, You just made it worse. You said you would never break my heart, Why did I listen to you. I guess our love just wasnt true. |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
let me no what u think live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot |
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Amused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 40 |
You expressed your feelings well in this poem. Sometimes we choose to love someone just from the words they speak, cause they are the words we so need to hear. |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
its been a long tim sinc i last wrote help live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot |
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