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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-10-29 08:45 PM




Ladylove Senryu
By: Noah Eaton
10/29/01

Scarlet Pimpernel

Scarlet pimpernel
My lady loves suede slipper
Dancing loves ballet


Stardance

You're my satellite
Twinkling bright in my eye
Dancing in sweet grace


Angel

My love sighs within
Singing softly in my heart
Chanting loves spirit


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
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1 posted 2001-10-29 08:59 PM



Noah~ Aww...these are so romantic   Lovely Senryus!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-10-29 09:04 PM


Noah!  Since you turned 18 your writing has become even better....if that be possible.
~Hugs to you sweetie, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-10-29 09:56 PM


Excellent work, Noah!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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4 posted 2001-10-29 10:47 PM


Every single poem I have read of yours has been breath-taking! You have a heart of gold and you express yourself so magically!
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5 posted 2001-10-30 01:20 AM


Your poetry is so very romantic. I can only hope when I find my soulmate he is half as romantic as you.

                          Dawn

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6 posted 2001-10-30 08:38 AM


Noah, you have turned into more of a romantic than ever.. Lovely writing here.
P.S. Want to make sure you saw this string of birthday wishes /pip/Forum51/HTML/002371.html
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-10-30 09:08 AM


Beautifully romantic are all of these. Of course I have come to expect no less from a heart filled with romance. BRAVO!!!  
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